Description: Well initially I had written this in a comment on one of Ravenwolf68's poems. The poem instigated the thoughts now written. I read them now and wonder if it hits you as it did me.
Special thanks to lisa (ravenwolf68), The dream world has always intrigued me, nightmares are in deed scary but, have a little something, whatever it is. It will give children courage to face such situations in the future.
I didn't put it into stanzas because it was a moment of spontinaity.
read with your eyes open!!!!!!!
simmering thoughts of a night. -------------------------------------------
The thumping of your newly created heart goes faster and faster, while your thoughts are unsure and running around like the passengers on the titanic after hitting of the iceberg. You clench your eyes shut so tight that tears start to fall out and then you suddenly take a deep breath and let it out slowly. The last few moments just took so much out of you that you faintly pass out ending the night with silence.
In the morning, noticing the stiff dryness on your cheek, you then find yourself trying to remember what happened.....
I have not read the pieve that evoked this one. Maybe one day I will. My initial problem was something entirely on my side of the poem - in the reading. I get this block when faced by a seemingly solid brick of words. But then again I worked around that by reading it aloud and reading thereafter the sounds of the poem rather than how it was put on the page.
Dreams are so powerful. Sometimes you feel so consumed in them, that you don't want to wake up. Sometimes you are so bitterly frightened by your imagination that you would give anything to wake up in a cold sweat. These days, I've been living a nitemare and praying that I can just get up and walk away from it. I'm afraid to piss... lol. This is such a vivid dream...~P
Submission Name: simmering thoughts of a night.
