That is gorgeous... and really sad. The line "I keep going back reopening the wound" seemed to stick out the most for me. I've done the same thing... I would expand on that, but your poem already said it all. Its been like 8 months and I still keep falling back to my ex... not physically anymore, but I think about him way too much. But yeah... very touching piece (is that how you spell that? or is it peice? hmm... the world may never know.) Anywho, this is excellent, as yours always are Another great job
This is a lovely poem you have written here! It touches on such a painful experience in one's life and talks of the difficulties faced when trying to move on with life and get over someone who means so much to you. I can relate to this as I have experienced this once before in my life too. It just seems so hard to leave that person in the past and even though you know in your heart that it is not meant to be something pulls you back in again. Trying to be strong and move on is not easy and trying to find someone special who shares the same interests and desires is even more difficult. This poem is very well written and expressed with sensitivity and lots of feelings. Only one spelling correction here..."because" in the fourth line of the first stanza. Otherwise this is a great poem! Nice job! Take care!
i can relate to this alot seen as its only been 1 month since i broke up wiv my x i have a new bf but i still miss my x lol :S anyways great poem and its defianitly goin in my faves lol take care izzi x
very brief but a lot of emotion in it. you really pour out your feelings in this poem. although i think it would be better if you emphasize your desperation of trying to forget him/her and always ending up "falling back". great work.
I thought this was a very good write. With specific emotions. I like the last two lines. When you expressed your love for this person as a open wound. because sometimes that is exactly how love feels. i think in the begining the flow was alittle off... but it was still good. I also like how you expressed how you wanted to meet someone new but somehow you couldnt. Now its been a couple of weeks searching, looking for a new person to meet All-in-all Good Job!