Hee hee! You made me laugh with the first stanza here "girl go choke on a mentos"That is great and so funny!haha! This is a great poem. You touch on the classic love/hate relationship so well and portray your feelings of confusion so well! Once again I can relate to this poem of yours. I have had this kind of confusion over someone before too and man does it suck! I like the comparison to a yo-yo as that is exactly how it feels and I also like the line "you tore me like a fabric" I thought that added some great reference and insight to your feelings. This is very well written and expressed with great feelings! I can feel the frustration as I read this! Wonderful! Take care!
Woah..I understand this COMPLETELY.It's like there's that annoiying girl/boy who sits next to you and pokes you in the side.You hate them entirely for that and you want them to die,but,when you think about it,you would end up killing yourself or living your life knowing that you couldn't live without that person if they did...And that feeling really,really sucks!Trust me,I know.Well,anyway,an extoirdinarly great poem.It has a true meaning that probabley comes from deep within.Great job. -Lindel
This made no sense. I think it had a deeper meaning than i could see. But this was quite weird. Not well written i must say that. Sorry but I dont really like this poem only because I cant understand it.