Well, Felicia, I did okay until the last stanza. It's clear (at least to me) that you're talking about different psychotropic (psychedelic?) substances and experiences, i, the dervish's drums. But I don't understand horse bones tilled soil, etc. That one I don't get.
It's very cryptic, so is kind of hard to critique, besides, what's there to criticize? You basically wrote a poetic list without passing judgment on the items listed. And my motto? Who needs drugs when you've got CHOCOLATE! mae