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    dots Submission Name: Returning to Medots
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    Author: loveispain
    ASL Info:    23/f/ME
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 283/198/51
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 496
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 673



    Description:
       My love, my life, my best friend, is finally leaving Iraq. Very soon he will be back where he belongs. With me. :) Just very thankful that in a few weeks...I can finally call him safe. And sooo waiting for that day I can hold him again. Thanks for reading. :)


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    dotsReturning to Medots
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    Months of pain, days of sorrow
    Praying and pleading
    That we see a tomorrow.
    My heart can finally beat,
    My soul can finally rest,
    Knowing your face I soon will meet.

    I only cry happy tears.
    I thank God every night,
    For relieving me these fears.
    The day your hand is in mine,
    I promise baby, it's coming,
    It's only a matter of time.

    You're leaving that place.
    Soon, air from the home country,
    Will caress your beautiful face.
    And so will I, my hero, my friend.
    I'll shower you with kisses,
    My love will never end.




    Submitted on 2005-09-16 18:37:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I loved this. I like the way it rhymed and the way it flowed. I'm very happy to hear that you're honey is going home to you, and you will finally be back with your boyfriend. It's beautiful. Both the piece, and the love you share with your boyfriend.
    | Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by miss__smiles | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent, both the poem AND the news. After reading your journal I had to read this one, as I thought I'd see a wonderful outpouring of love, devotion and thankfulness.

    I was right.

    Well done, and all happiness upon you both.

    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow this is so sweet and heartfelt. I cant say that I know how this feels. But I know that, hundreds, perhaps, know this feeling. What a beautiful tone. So far I like what I see in your writing.
    | Posted on 2005-09-18 00:00:00 | by Tarwen Nevle | [ Reply to This ]


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