Description: When I did this poem, I said the 2X7 line thru a kid's toy megaphone that distorted the voice. A chaotic hammered dulcimer was playing along. It was so funny to see people's faces in the video! Most were horrifically confused, & some DID think it was funny, which it was s'posed to be. BTW, does anyone know how to REALLY spell chisembop? (that tapping the fingers to add thing from the 70's)
I think there are some pretty good lines in this. The rest of it is probably best left up to how it is performed. I can see this live thru a megaphone or something as a cool opening act! And its inspired me enough to at least see what else you've been getting into.