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Submission Name: A Good Woman Painter dots

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Author:	eliwhitneyradio
Elite Ratio:	3.15 - 49/51/13
Words:	31

Class/Type:	Poetry/Passion
Total Views:	229
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Description:
This was actually inspired by Jackson Pollock and Modest Mouse. Not that the talents of those people carry over into the work itself.

A Good Woman Painter dots

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We could cut
My head off
Have ourselves a planet

Make a map
For you to
Decorate with

All the speckles
And pretend I
never planned it.

Submitted on 2005-09-17 00:28:54 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  We could cut
My head off
Have ourselves a planet

I LOVED that! I really enjoyed this. Very unique and great to read! You have a very original way of writing and this definitely stood out for me.
| Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by Sugar | [ Reply to This ]
  lol u even tring to ryhm this site says skills and u show none. this one is longer but has no point. realy kid why u say that crap to me.
| Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]
  In these few words you created quite an image
Its extremely cleverly written
Ala
the brain
I loved it
And hey I Havent heard from you in a while hope everything is ok
Keep In Touch
Ron
| Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  i agree it sounds like lyrics, but it feels like only part of a song. i like it so far but i feel like there's a lot more yu can say with it.
| Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by colerinja | [ Reply to This ]
  this almost sounds like lyrics. i could see this being sung by incubus or death cab for cutie, or something along those lines.
i like how few words you're able to paint a picture with.

keep writing.

| Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by jeffiner | [ Reply to This ]

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