lol what I wrote is to be said as a song but u to young to think like that look I said it was lyrics and you got some prity dumb crap can u write anthing longer. Hey I realy would care if it came from someone who has work to be respected but yours is crap
sad, hockey is such a great sport and that poor little puck, did you try to save it? I see you have another post called "Heimlich" ( I haven't read yet) so I was just wondering. I am not much of a haiku writer myself, suppose I just don't have the time to write anything so short. ( that was meant to be funny). I would have to give this a thumbs up. I particularly like the way you chose to split be and come, interesting, I like.
Submission Name: Summer (A Hockey Haiku)
