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Author: Aj
ASL Info:    21/M/MI
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(revised) Got the title from the local band, Another Terrorist Orginization. Vegans and Vegetarians in texas are actually considered terrorist. It's against the law there to not eat meat pretty much. That's where that band got there name. Even if you don't have the will power to be a Vegan or Vegetarian, please try your hardest not to consume from factory farms. These are the farms that aren't ran by the traditional family farmer, but instead corporations who don't give a shit about the earth, the quality of there products, or you for that matter. Be aware, alert and involved. Visit to learn how you can consume wisely.


raised from an infant
only living in a box
you'd think it'd be decent
but really it is not
gorged full of hormones
to encourage false growth
you're listening now
and that's good to know
standing in litter
as deep as the seas
growing so intensive
contracting disease
harvested for profit
a life left unlived
the body and heart
toss it all in
mix it all up
formented and green
you'd know the most
you are what you eat

Submitted on 2004-04-16 21:36:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Being a vegetarian since age 13, I really like this. I feel so sorry for those poor animals. You do have a typo in line 1 though, "in infant" should be "an infant."
| Posted on 2004-04-17 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]

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