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    dots Submission Name: Reflection noitcelfeRdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 729
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 440



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    Love,Peace,Joy!!!

    It's a working weekend & I just needed a momentary lapse of reason.....

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    dotsReflection noitcelfeRdots
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    Bring us to balanced
    Unison

    Merge us a rainbow
    ark of color
    ever
    Reaching

    Life's juice captured
    a grape

    Rise Sun
    Fall Moon

    High Tide
    Low Mood

    Brother
    to the
    Cloudz

    Roots
    Infinite

    Vines o'plenty

    A Reflection
    of a
    noitcelfeR




    Submitted on 2005-09-17 14:45:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Brother to the clouds... & sister to the rain perhaps ?. Rainbows are wonderful things and every mention of them - for me is always so invigorating.
    | Posted on 2005-09-18 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Different but I like it. I like the high tide low moon very good and brother to the cloudz. I think that you did a great job. Keep on writing. God Bless, Dawn
    | Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, what I like about this is the surreal and abstract quality yet incorporates the talents of nature.
    'Merge us a rainbow
    ark of color
    ever
    Reaching'
    So descriptive and accurate of what a rainbow really is.
    The title is striking at first glance, I thought it read "Reflection NOtice LIfe" and even though it doesnt say that exactly, that is what is imprinted on my mind. What an impact!
    | Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by Tarwen Nevle | [ Reply to This ]
      Quite interesting :) It's good to see the Epipheric style is still in effect! :) Almost an epiphacu except it doesn't follow the grand ol' format (But it is about nature!!!) Alrighty then :) Muy Bueno @!

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    | Posted on 2005-09-18 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]


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