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    dots Submission Name: The Land of Doopiadots
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    Author: Avril54
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 163/206/34
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Spoof/Misc
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    Description:
       This is more of a fantasy geography lesson, but so what. Now, if you're really stupid and believe there really is an 8th continent, don't read this!


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    dotsThe Land of Doopiadots
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    Off the cost of Cuba, there's an uncharted island,
    or the 8th continent, which consists of three small countries: Doopia, Mgleckinesia and Gilgameshia.

    All three of these countries have what a U.S. state would have: Big cities, small towns and a capital.

    Now, Doopia has some major cities, such as DoopDoop, New Doopton and the capital, Doopville.

    In Mgleckinesia, you have Oohdorkbopton, Ooloogadadaville, and th capital is Boonkyjonkjonk.
    Now, the Gilgameshian alphabet is not on the keyboard, so I can't tell you
    the names of the cities or capital of Gilgameshia.

    Doopia and Mgleckanesia are very much alike, they have the same country fruit (the Muahdtoo berry), and they're language is simliar, except Mgleckanesian sounds a bit more muddled to Americans.

    In some ways, Doopia is like the United States, they have a 'Doopian Britney Spears', she's a Doopian singer, her name is Umtigabumdie. And they have a famous guitar player, Wabadagwaywie.

    And if you ever went to Mgleckinesia, you would most likely find yourself sitting in the Boonky Cafe in Boonkyjonkjonk, sipping a Muahdtoo-Berry Smoothie listening to the Mgleck. band, FookooNopo playing their latest hit, "Tookoo Muahdtoo."

    All three of these countries are a wonderful vacation spot, tourist attraction, or a great place to live.

    And as the great Doopian proffessor, Snick Von Goop-Gope once said, "Mah-tooky punk poonk foof foof."




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      This was slighty funny and in some ways disturbing LOL this is definatly unique...wow I have no clue what to say...this was slightly confusing and very childish..go u lol.O.o= = =
    peace
    | Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      Is this something you made up one night while high on sugar cookie dough with your other girlfriends? Perhaps for some kindergardner book this might work. Actually there were bits of somewhat unique stuff but flanked by same ole same ole or bordering on plagerism. I would really like to see you use your vivid imagination to attempt a shot at something serious, an actuall attempt at something more mainstream or something more recognized as poetry. Everything I have read seems like a blog, or just some way to have chit chat fun with your friends.

    Pssssssst!
    u no who
    | Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by BenCollier | [ Reply to This ]
      ok in my world, this stuff insist. but here is the thing. santa and the tooth fairy are married. now they had kids. each child controls the cities with the country that you mentioned. do not ask me to make sense, till you stop telling me i have spelling erros. i can not spell i am a spelling failure lol peace and i lied this one it is a fav.
    | Posted on 2005-11-06 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ]
      ah yes doopia, i meant to go there instead, i ended up in a jail in the middle of nowhere. you see, i had a doopian flyer given to me by a one eyed pirate named Ted. Ted known for his stories of cruising the hodgepodge seas with his lovely mohawk shaven parrot claptrap. as i was reading about the local doopian hot spots, he suggested we go fishing off the garlock bridge for purple salamanderfish! i told him there was no such thing as a purple salamanderfish! everyone worth their weight in silver sheckles knows that salamanderfish only come in pink fluorescent polka dots and blue stripes! anyhow we got into a big fight! the local sheriff arrested us. no salamanderfish fishing for me and the flyer was confiscated as evidence. when i got out, i was forced to get a job to pay off the medical bills that Ted accumulated. so i took a sweet deal at the local dive "the boondocks" i saw ole Ted he had claptrap with him. poor bird had multicolored dyed head feathers! well thatís my story and Iím sticking to it.

    ~mike
    | Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
      damn it! i read your description AFTER I searched my globe for the 8th continent for an hour! I'm just kidding.. (or am I?). either way it was definitely fun , imaginitive, fantastic, even delicious if I were gay.
    either way I like your style, keep it up
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by onepieces | [ Reply to This ]
      I think Krazy was right on this... It was fun to read, but you should expend a little more. This piece of work was totally random wasn't it? Anyway, I can see by your work, that you have a lot of creativity. Keep it up. Let your spirit soar, and feel the words. That way, theirs no reason, you don't make great work piece. Keep it up. I liked it. And never forget this, always be true to your art. And you'll become a great writer.
    | Posted on 2005-09-28 00:00:00 | by Gothik | [ Reply to This ]
      Mentavalabas gravtilentalia! Hepdapooda lempta valloodoria!

    That means...funny and creative stuff! I liked reading this! (In Mgleckinesian of course)

    Thanks for giving me a good chuckle this sunday morn. Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-09-18 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      dude! that's so cool! that's a lot of what i end up saying when i'm really really hyper, and so, strangely, it almost, but not quite entirely makes minimal sense to me. very nice, totally random, but without trying to make it into anything other thatn an excuse to write some totally confusing stuff. nice job.

    cheers, Azael
    | Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by Anticlownperson | [ Reply to This ]
      You are an odd one. lol I don't know exactly what to say about it. You should expand! Make it into a story, it might be fun. Hell, I'd read it. This is an odd little piece, not much to it, but it was fun to read...trying to pronounce the names was a kick. My Doopia name is Aguataloo. *Thinks* You should really make a story out of this. I want to read more, because it confuses me...and I don't like to be confused...so I want to read more and become even more confused?

    Damn, I just confused myself...AHH!

    *Runs away*

    Aguataloo
    | Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by Krazy | [ Reply to This ]
      It is different. I like it. I couldnt pronouce the words to good. But very good imagination.
    Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]


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