Using colors to portray emotions of people was original and truly amazing. Are you a painter? it seems like it because of the detail and crisp images you have created. i will for sure add this as a favorite. It was plainly beautiful. I love the way you took love and viewed it into an artistic, original way. These words by itself can create the painting you've drawn into phrases. There is just a mear suggestion I have. For the stanza's 2-4, the first phrases starts off as
"For red...For blue...For yellow.."
I didn't see anything wrong with that style but you could change it up a bit and write those ideas in different forms just to add different tastes to the colors in each stanza. It's just a thought. Lovely. Take care.
welll.. i guess you are a ppainter and aa writer so you are a good artist ... i love it . and it will be one of my favorites.. i love your ideas and the words you use to express your ideas... and the structure was great ... it was unique ... like all say ... i love this part :
"Paint until fervent passion radiates A surreal glow, a soothing warmth Paint till none have to concentrate To find what it is or itís worth"
keep on writing and ... why dont you check out my writings.. good bye and take care! victor
This was extremely unique! I fell in love immediately with the ideas in this piece. The idea of painting with life, it's just so amazing how you put this together. It's so nice to read something like this, getting such a vivid image of what you're speaking of and the amount of passion conveyed through your words, the love of your art! This was very beautiful and extremely creative! GREAT job! Candi
I thought this was very original and I being a lover of anything creative I like how you use painting here & the colors of life and where they come from and what they stand for. Really colorful! I like positive pieces like this! Great job! Love,Peace,Joy! tif
this was a little tedious in the beginning, but after a while you are kind of drawn into it. the first stanza was just a little slow, but after you get into the colors it starts to flow. i really loved your ideas in this. i love how you define where each color is drawn from. this is probably one of the most original views of love ive read yet. all in all, good write.