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Lost


Author: runaway_poet
ASL Info:    21/m/limbo
Elite Ratio:    6.2 - 42 /41 /21
Words: 13
Class/Type: Personal Quotes /Depressed
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under so much stress im drowning. its hard to swim with a world of pain on your shoulders.


Lost


how coquettish life is like razors edge, but as arcane as my mind




Submitted on 2005-09-18 00:29:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I have visited the world of pain many times. "I stress, therefore I am". Its a quote I live by. Although I hate being stressed I can not imagine life without it. How can we live without stress. What will motivate us then. I liked your poem. Straight to the point. What else is there to say? Life is tough and strong. As a wise man once said, it gives you the test first and then the lesson.
| Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by Katrinagolden | [ Reply to This ]


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