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    Author: runaway_poet
    ASL Info:    21/m/limbo
    Elite Ratio:    6.2 - 42/41/21
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Depressed
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    Bytes: 65



    Description:
       under so much stress im drowning. its hard to swim with a world of pain on your shoulders.


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    how coquettish life is like razors edge, but as arcane as my mind




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      I have visited the world of pain many times. "I stress, therefore I am". Its a quote I live by. Although I hate being stressed I can not imagine life without it. How can we live without stress. What will motivate us then. I liked your poem. Straight to the point. What else is there to say? Life is tough and strong. As a wise man once said, it gives you the test first and then the lesson.
    | Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by Katrinagolden | [ Reply to This ]


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