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    dots Submission Name: Because They Were Beautifuldots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       A madrigal is a type of song that originated in the 14th century. They came to England last. Many English madrigals had "fa, la, la's."

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    dotsBecause They Were Beautifuldots

    We used to make up madrigals
    just because they were beautiful
    not caring that they were passť.
    I remember your mouth opened into a perfect O
    Singing "fa, la, la".
    I longed to kiss you so much,
    but I couldn't commit that heresy
    because your voice made the nightingale
    sound like Bob Dylan,
    and your face was so serene
    that a sunset looked like a massacre
    in comparison.

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      This is the most flattering thing I've ever read! Just kidding of course. Ah, where to begin? I read this because it had so few comments on it, yet I find it hard to comment on other than to say that it is great, a sentiment that I have managed to stretch into many lines.
    | Posted on 2004-06-07 00:00:00 | by Black Rock Tractor | [ Reply to This ]
      your poem sounds sad...
    like something was lost, and someone wants to find it again.
    The wording of your poem...Yes, could go in many direction...but that is what one of the translations, that I thought of.
    The other one sounds dirty..and Well, I aint' going there....
    No offense towards you or your poem.
    | Posted on 2004-04-17 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh yeah!! I love your comparisons....You take things that are undeniably beautiful and turn them into pure ugly...LOL! This is serious and funny and just plain made me happy....I kept hearing the little song "I'm Joxer the mighty.." (yeah, I admit I have watched Xena...people say I look like her.) LOL!! Not quite a madrigal but it reminded me of that....Oh thanks for this one!!
    | Posted on 2004-04-17 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
      again a little love poem. sweet. I liked it very much. the lines
    "And your face was so serene
    That a sunset looked like a massacre
    In comparison"
    are great.
    | Posted on 2004-04-17 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW!! nightingales sounding like bob dylan... thats one gorgeous image... this person must have a simply amazing voice!! this is an awesome poem!
    | Posted on 2004-04-16 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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