Wow. I like this a lot actually. You really put a lot of feeling into such a short piece... even though you were stoned at the time...which probably means you didn't really care if it flowed...lol...anyway, the last line really stands out to me.
"Because no one stays around forever"
This line makes it easy to relate to, I guess, because everyone has felt this way at one point Thank for hearing me out. Keep up the good work. -Tiff