this is simply a good, clean cut poem. and unlike most poetry, it's not depressing!(although depressive poetry is my favorite.) i especially enjoyed how you changed up each ending line a little. good effort, keep writing.
i know what you mean, about feeling like you're just being melted into everyone else. I've felt like that before, like someone was pouring me into a mold. i really like this, it's one of those poems where you don't realize the significance of what you've just read until you finish. it's really nice.
I didnt knwo you were from Puerto Rico. Well... N-e-wayz, I thought the poem was pretty good. I didnt know what you were talking about until I read the desciption thoug, but I guess all poetry doesnt really have to elaborate on what it is talking about. I'm not sure I get the whole melting pot reference though. But anywayz good work! ::: smile:::