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    dots Submission Name: Angeldots

    Author: wakethedead
    ASL Info:    34/M/Ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.99 - 13/13/9
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       I've written "Angel" for a friend named Grachel way back May 18, 1998. She has this certain aura the captures the attention of others specially me. This is the first song I've written since I lost my other lyrics due to a fire accident. Angel is a simple lyric-poetry which my brother overheard at a local radio station, it was one of the winner of 'Pop Quiz' who recited the lyrics for her boyfriend. Well it was great that someone could relate to my lyrics, even if she didn't mention who wrote it. The only song I've written that reached the radio, technically speaking of course.

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    these past few days iíve been so inspired
    i feel so alive no wonder why
    got this good reason here inside
    too good to set aside no need to hide
    inside here waiting
    inside you know iíd be saying

    its like iím gazing at an angel
    its like iím talking to an angel
    i really donít know what i could do
    more likely iím up in heaven

    listen to her soft sweet voice
    today, and everyday things will be okay
    seeing her with that lovely smile
    all this is worthwhile and iíd feel fine
    in time here waving
    in time you know iíd be telling

    its like iím gazing at an angel
    its like iím talking to an angel
    i really donít know what i could do
    more likely iím up in heaven
    ...with an angel like you

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      I know that I'm taking this totally out of context of your work, but I really loved the line, "too good to set aside no need to hide" just because of what it says. I've been kind of going through a roughish time lately, and it just really struck a chord. I guess I interpreted it to the matter of that eventually people will see that I am too good to set aside and I will eventually realize that I have no need to hide anymore. Yeah, that's it. Anyways, I don't know what I can say about this. I read the description, and I'm sorry to hear that you lost all (or most) of your stuff in a fire. That sounds so terrible. I've never been through that kind of thing, and I wish no one had to, but stuff happens I guess. The only thing comming to mind now is that we all hope to find an angel, and most of us will. And when we do, hopefully we are with them forever. This really made me think, and I'm glad that you posted it. I hope to see more of your writes litering the site (but litering in a good way.)

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