let me just say this at first, Bravo at putting this into such tremendous words. I love this and i will be adding this to my favorites. This describes it all, the entire way of thought when one is commiting the art of cutting. It was described in a manor i have been searching for for some time now. and here it is. Because this is what the scar is all about, forgetting your problems and woes, if only for a instant they are gone. and this says it. Bravo!
You could just eternally grin Stop thinking To float Let you stop sinking ok that stanza needs some more work, the third line throws the whole thing off, but overall it was one of the better cutter poems that i have read...good job
pretty good piece. i thought that some of it has been said before, but it's still relevant. the fourth stanza's last line is akward to me and the last stanza seems to have been written ona whim and for the purpose of rhyming words. good effort, though.
Submission Name: Forgetting Pain
