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    dots Submission Name: Deathdots
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    Author: poet09
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 148/150/108
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       Just keep it real with me about this poem


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    dotsDeathdots
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    Death is a cry that people can carry on for the rest of their lives

    Death is a shadow that has come over everything light

    Death is what is at the end of life with no turning back

    Death is what can come like a theif swift and quick without a trace

    Death is the final solution to all things that live




    Submitted on 2005-09-19 06:46:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes. Death IS the solution to all things that live. Kill them all!!! F**KING SLAUGHTER THEM. If they deserve to live they'll join up with you and rise and kill until nothing's left.
    | Posted on 2009-01-14 00:00:00 | by Old | [ Reply to This ]
      you have a real good sense of words you would probably do better by trying to write a book if you totaly feel poetry instead the only advice i would give you is to show some personal feelings
    | Posted on 2005-09-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Way too short this could have been a spectacular poem if you just put more words into your feelings do not be afraid to put some happy thoughts with the sad it can totaly make a poem
    | Posted on 2005-09-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Life- no one gets out alive. I liked this poem. The uncomfortable truth, none of us really admit too. We're good at pretending. Just gotta live while your alive, I suppose. SKY DIVING!
    | Posted on 2005-09-19 00:00:00 | by Red_reaper | [ Reply to This ]


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