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did that make him a rose?


Author: Sarah Leger
ASL Info:    15.f.kissimmee,Fl
Elite Ratio:    3.74 - 436 /387 /80
Words: 112
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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um it's a religious piece if you can see it despite my Paganism...


did that make him a rose?



Whirling
Whirling
The sky is twirling
Vomit it up
only to swallow it down
jagged pill
rotting in the pit of her stomach
People crying
-because the angels are dying-
hide from mercy
feed the hungry
and they'll only be thirsty
SPEAKING FASTER
repeating yourself
the magic is gone
your heart says so long
Crowned by the vines
did that make him a rose?
chained to the wall of your Hell
hidden by the dark
-scream-
-cry-
-ignored-
whipped by the Demons
HIDE FROM THEIR MERCY!
HIDE IN YOUR PAIN!
Nailed down
Rusty wounds
standing high
Because you were torn down
and whisper

so she doesn't feel your pain




Submitted on 2005-09-19 16:18:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  True that. Yes its angry and sarcastic and still amazing. And I must admit each time I've read your work I haven't liked it... Til now that is. And I like the way it was set out, it reall suited this sort of poem. It feels like it's made up of two parts, the beginning feels separate from the end but the transition between is smooth and unnoticeable.
Good work
Laura-Grace
| Posted on 2005-09-26 00:00:00 | by dark-red-pain | [ Reply to This ]
  Jesus Cahurist. Gohosh. lol. i hart this. It seems angry. Yet meaningful...well...yes meaningful. lol. Not much to say. But umm i harted it hardkore. With a Q.

Fukk Love from Within
| Posted on 2005-09-19 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]


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