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    dots Submission Name: His Lovedots
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    Author: lil_gh0st_girl
    ASL Info:    16-F-NV
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 32/38/21
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 258
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 388



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       i dont care what u say.......it came from the heart and no matter what u say im happy with it.


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    dotsHis Lovedots
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    he came from behind me,
    holding me with his arms.
    telling me he loved me,
    with all of his heart.
    His Love is what i needed,
    for me to be ok.
    to know that someone loved me
    in every which way.
    after every heartbreak,
    i smile and think,
    His Love he has gave,
    So my heart.....
    He can take.





    Submitted on 2005-09-19 23:24:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great poem I thought you did a fine job with it. I thought that maybe in the one part, to know that someone loved me in each and every way may work too. The only reason I say that is because as I was reading that it just came out that way for me before I even realized what I was reading. Just a thought. Anyway I thought that it was great just the way it was. Keep on writing. God Bless, Dawn
    | Posted on 2005-09-20 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww. . .how sweet. You're both verry lucky and I hope you always feel the way you do. This is short but a great right. Good job.

    Sarah
    | Posted on 2005-09-20 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]
      hey this was really good..i really enjoyed reading it and i can really relate, good write keep up the good work

    ~adalae
    | Posted on 2005-09-20 00:00:00 | by lifeNsoul1224 | [ Reply to This ]
      Its a good poem which i like... i enjoyed reading about how you feel when he is close and how he entered the picture just so much feeling to it... anyways yeah good write it reminded me of things ive gone through... but yeah Keep writting and thanks ;)
    | Posted on 2005-09-20 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]



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