Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: royaltydots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 494
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 523



    Description:
       this is establishing my being an aberrant king (royalty) and the fact that I won't take shit


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsroyaltydots
    -------------------------------------------


    you looking at some royalty like you ain't ever seen/
    bitches bow down when they hear my voice ring/
    Cryme payz like the president, for every bomb thats dropped/
    he getting payed a half a mil. like racist fucks and crops/

    What, What Bitch, what was that you just said/
    Don't try and explain, you better run or you'll be dead/
    wake up and realize that you neck is leaking red/
    for every time you fucked with me is every once that you have bled/




    Submitted on 2005-09-20 17:14:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Shows a strong ass woman who don' t take [censored] from nobody especially no hatin ass female. But the [censored] was expressive and straight to the point. I liked it.
    | Posted on 2005-09-23 00:00:00 | by JayceD | [ Reply to This ]
      it seems that u have a severe case of "fUck the world syndrome ". it's good sometimes, but sometimes it's bad. i think u handle ur's well though and wherever ur motivation comes from don't let it go.
    | Posted on 2005-09-21 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that you are a little bit obsessed with yourself!

    Also you need to learn how to think about other things other than yourself.
    | Posted on 2005-09-21 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]
      What, What Bitch, what was that you just said/
    Don't try and explain, you better run or you'll be dead/
    wake up and realize that you neck is leaking red/
    for every time you [censored]ed with me is every once that you have bled/

    those were the fUckin most powerful lyrics ever! i can fuCkin already tell you wont take shIt...hell maybe i shouldnt of punched you earlier...if you read that comment b4 this one...damm...i d hate to mess with you!

    XxXSuicidalxxchildXxX
    | Posted on 2005-09-20 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    75012

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    Dream written by closetpoet
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    The Abyss of Love written by poetotoe
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry