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    dots Submission Name: royaltydots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 515
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    Bytes: 523



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       this is establishing my being an aberrant king (royalty) and the fact that I won't take shit


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    dotsroyaltydots
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    you looking at some royalty like you ain't ever seen/
    bitches bow down when they hear my voice ring/
    Cryme payz like the president, for every bomb thats dropped/
    he getting payed a half a mil. like racist fucks and crops/

    What, What Bitch, what was that you just said/
    Don't try and explain, you better run or you'll be dead/
    wake up and realize that you neck is leaking red/
    for every time you fucked with me is every once that you have bled/




    Submitted on 2005-09-20 17:14:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Shows a strong ass woman who don' t take [censored] from nobody especially no hatin ass female. But the [censored] was expressive and straight to the point. I liked it.
    | Posted on 2005-09-23 00:00:00 | by JayceD | [ Reply to This ]
      it seems that u have a severe case of "fUck the world syndrome ". it's good sometimes, but sometimes it's bad. i think u handle ur's well though and wherever ur motivation comes from don't let it go.
    | Posted on 2005-09-21 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that you are a little bit obsessed with yourself!

    Also you need to learn how to think about other things other than yourself.
    | Posted on 2005-09-21 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]
      What, What Bitch, what was that you just said/
    Don't try and explain, you better run or you'll be dead/
    wake up and realize that you neck is leaking red/
    for every time you [censored]ed with me is every once that you have bled/

    those were the fUckin most powerful lyrics ever! i can fuCkin already tell you wont take shIt...hell maybe i shouldnt of punched you earlier...if you read that comment b4 this one...damm...i d hate to mess with you!

    XxXSuicidalxxchildXxX
    | Posted on 2005-09-20 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]


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