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one and only -------------------------------------------
You're the one who showed me the path
you taught me to love, you taught me to laugh
you found all the good things hidden deep inside
you liked me you loved me then left me stupified
not knowing if ever i can trust
i return to you wether for love or for lust
duct tape and makeup
hide a bloody break up
but my eternal soul
remains a gaping black hole
drug or anti-drug
both are you to me
for you its the same
but still you leave me be
a mixed message will scathe all my readers
a lovely love life full of super freaks and bleeders
you are my one and only
the only one for me
you look into the mirror and tell me what you see
a boy with love in his heart and truth on his lips
goodbye was not the ending
and neither is this
me plus you equals love
and love equals bliss
aw mike i relly like this im def goin to say that this is one of the best u have ever soon me.. im so proud of u for writing something with this much depth.. well as usuall i have a new one up haha check it out hunnnny <33ash
I really liked this one. It was definately original. I could feel how deep your emotions went in this. I really enjoyed reading it and I think that you did a great job showing your feelings. Can't wait to read more! Alissa
I really enjoyed this...no problems with it at all. i was just perfect. i liked the rhyming you used with it and it was very powerful in your words... it made me feel something...good job..
Submission Name: one and only
