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    dots Submission Name: I want to kiss youdots

    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsI want to kiss youdots

    I want to kiss you,
    each and every part of you.
    Starting at your lips
    and ending at your toes,
    I want to kiss your forehead
    down to the end of your nose.
    A gentle kiss on each eyelid
    and on unshaven cheeks
    your chin, your neck, your earlobes,
    where I know it makes you weak.
    I want to kiss your shoulders
    right down to your bare chest,
    your arms, your hands, your fingertips
    and the nipples on your breasts.
    I want to kiss your belly
    and then move down to your waist,
    a little bit lower now
    is my favorite part to taste.
    Slowly past your thighs,
    not to forget about your knees,
    past the ankles and to the toes,
    concludes my little tease...

    Submitted on 2005-09-22 17:05:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      DUDE...WTF...NOW IM HORNY >.<...gah its good though...very...ya...thanks >;) your my hero...im wat yoo lazy to write more than like ten words sooo loike...im gonna keep typing on how you made me horny...kissing period gets me going...anywhere...soooo ALL THIS KISSING not cool...your an unessicary evil...even though i <3 you for your comment on one and only...your good at expressiong your sexual feelings
    | Posted on 2005-09-23 00:00:00 | by Seedofbayne | [ Reply to This ]
      this was indeed enjoyable to read.and from a guys perspective,just enough lust to keep me interested(lol)
    ryme and format were excellent if thats important to you.
    and the picture you are protraying and the feeling you are describing=there is nothing like it
    you done a nice job wiyh this
    enjoyed thourghly and felt it even more

    | Posted on 2005-09-22 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]

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