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    dots Submission Name: black tapedots
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    Author: sbridges
    ASL Info:    33/F/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 119/119/63
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Haiku/
    Total Views: 1076
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    Bytes: 88



    Description:
       my first official haiku


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    dotsblack tapedots
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    black tape for princess
    she will tie you up quite tight
    then throw it away




    Submitted on 2005-09-22 21:15:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I guess I don't get the whole Haiku thing. I agree with the other comment about admiring anyone who can do these. They are very short. However, yours is good. Keep on writing! God Bless, Dawn
    | Posted on 2005-09-23 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]
      haiku's are too short. i had to write haiku's in year eight, it sucked. i admire anyone who can write a haiku. i'm not really sure what this has got to do with society, but it's good. moo!
    angela
    | Posted on 2005-09-22 00:00:00 | by m with two i_s | [ Reply to This ]


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