Description: I guess it is pretty self explanatory. Tell me what you think. It may not be real good, then again, I don't think that any of my stuff is very good. For me it is just a form of cheap therapy.
I Don't Belong -------------------------------------------
I need to get away from you
I am not quite sure what to do
Evil is truly what you are
The pain you cause leaves a scar
I pray for strength to get me through
You make me so angry I sit and stew
I do not understand why you're so greedy
Never could I see you helping the needy
So glad I was not raised by you
I could only imagine the hell you would have put me through
I try very hard to be a much better person
As time goes on your actions only worsen
I really thought that you had changed
I realize now that you're exactly the same
It is very sad that you think of only yourself
With everything in the world going on you are very selfish
All you do is brag and brag
It is so damn sickening I begin to gag
I guess it's time that I move along
Because with you I do not belong
Ouch !. Quite different from your more recent stuff. Good write though. Maybe the rhyming was just a little too forced at times (bordering on clichés). But all in all, it was good and shows your versatility.
Hey that was indeed a nice piece of work---loads of effort involved --i see or perhaps you've given a vent to your heart---anyways i like the tone and manner and it is absolutely fantastic---the rhyming gives the push to the poem which it deserves and makes it all the more interesting to read..keep it up.
Good, I like it. I like the rhyming you put in it even though it is as you say "a form of cheap therapy". The only thing I'm not quite sure about is who is it directed to? A father, a boyfriend, somebody else? Its not really clear, just that you hate him.