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    dots Submission Name: Me sweet ! No fucking waydots
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    Author: lost and alone
    ASL Info:    19/F/Sandiego,CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 159/140/58
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMe sweet ! No fucking waydots
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    DId I give you the impression,
    that I was nice?
    cause if I did I lied!
    I don't do nice,
    and
    I don't do cute.
    And if you piss me off,
    I'll kick your ass!
    pregnent or not!
    I might only be '4'9'
    and pregnent at that.
    but what I lack for in height,
    I make up for in personality.
    Do you see the smile on my face?
    It means you made my day.
    but you'd better be careful,
    you never know how,
    I might make you pay.
    I'll tell you there's a halo
    floating above my head,
    but ask anyone else,
    and they'll tell you
    there's a few sets of hornes
    holding that halo above my head.
    and it's getting in my way.




    Submitted on 2005-09-24 11:10:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      anywho i didnt particulary like this poem. short people always go on these violent rampages to prove themselves..its almost amusing. ALMOST. you spelled pregnant wrong but o well.
    | Posted on 2005-09-24 00:00:00 | by brokensmile | [ Reply to This ]
      This is an awesome poem you expressed yourself well and i totaly felt like i was right there as you were writing it theres a couple of spelling eras but big deal feel free to read my poetry
    | Posted on 2005-09-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      That is a kick ass poem litterally. People think that short and pregnant equals weak but they are sorely mistaken. You remind me of my big sis, she has five kids, and she goes to the PTA meetings but she is still a warrior at heart.
    | Posted on 2005-09-24 00:00:00 | by alittlebithippy | [ Reply to This ]
      Well this was amusing. I liked it. I haven't read one like it before so I give you crdit for it being original. Well tyhat's all I have say. So later. Good write.
    | Posted on 2005-09-24 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]


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