Description: This is a sad version of a poem “Was is it from you” I had written previously, since situation has changed, I thought I should also change my poem.
Tell me what do you think about it..
Was it from you (sad version) -------------------------------------------
While walking alone with no dears
Wind brought me agonizing pain with frozen tears
Was it from you?
While laying on my bed not asleep
Someone gave me a wound so deep
Was it from you?
While crying under my unhappy tree
A chain of unfaithfulness made me smile free
Was it from you?
While sitting within my sorrow
My heart was broken by a poisoned arrow
This is sad It to me was a very well written poem about being hurt from ther one you thought you loved Just Realize all the knowledge you gained from that relationship that will carry over into your next relationship
A good Write Take Care Ron
And thank you for the comments on my poetry I very much appreciate it Thank You
a very good write i felt the pain you were trying to display in this piece i liked how you described all the situations bringing you down and not quite sure if it was that person and then you found out it was when he struck you i hope im wrong but does that line have to do with being hit by someone keep writing as you have a message to get out and your doing a good job of it
Woooooooooooow! very sad but it is a real masterpiece. Do not know what to say about your poem but all I can say that you have to be proud of yourself for writing great things like that one I've just read. Your idea is very clear and I really feel what you feel. Great Job.
Submission Name: Was it from you (sad version)
