Description: wow...where to begin...umm...my boyfriend and i broke up...i still love him alot but there is no chance for me to be with him ever again...and its just tearing me up inside...hope you like it..
The Death Of My Heart -------------------------------------------
all i remember
is your eyes
looking at me like im more than who i am
and your arms
holding me like youll protect me before yourself and your whisper
telling me you always be with me
and sometimes i can still hear you
but everyone knows your not there
the day you left me is the day i died
all the neighbors hear my cries
because i cant stop thinking about how i never got to say goodbye
but ill still try
to forget you
even though it will tear me apart
to think, you committed a crime
with all the other feelings thrown in the cart today...marks the death of my heart. 9/21/05
i really enjoyed reading this cuz ive been through this before but you really need to work on it. i think that you should really be more descriptive on the break up and stuff. the vagueness of the poem is rather annoying...but i still really enjoyed the meaning and emotion...that has never been stronger
Submission Name: The Death Of My Heart
