Description: Um.....I coudnt think of a title, but this was inspired by my boyfriend and i'm not afraid to say so! Haha, love ya babe!
P.S.- Can someone thnk of a title for me? I just can't come up with one that fits the poem...
P.P.S.- Sorry, I had to use your name love. :^)
What is this feeling
So pure and true
I can sense it in my every being
Like the kiss of a butterfly
Gentle breezes from a pond
Quiet kisses at night
The warm embrace of the sun
As an angel takes flight
Could this be love?
Or is this simply heaven?
This feeling of freedom, kiss me again
A kiss so sweet and gentle
A kiss i yearn for
Hold me like you've held no other
Love me as I love you
With all my heart
I love you
OMG u and Mac make me sick wit this luv crap :^) I'm kidden. I am really happy for Marc and I remember what it feels like to be head over heels in love. It's intoxicating and overwhelming and scary. Marc is a wonderfully wierd guy and is extremely lovable so I understand how he has become an inspiration for u. This was really good. You definatly havev a way with words and I like it. I can't help you with a tittle because the one you have is OK. Leave it be, you can't exspand on perfection. remember that. I will be adding this as a favorite. Good job JOYA.