This is very well written. I like the emotions that you put into writing this. I liked the way you flow from one sentence to the other. Also, the questions are the sort of type I would probably ask my future self. Good job.
Ooooh there was some nice feeling and emotion in here. This was very good I really liked it. It was interesting cause you were writing or talking to your old self and asking questions about yourself now. Or thats what it seemed to me.:-P. I've kind of done the same thing. Just questioned what I've done now and what I think. This piece basically said it all. I have zip-zero-silch complaints. I really liked this one. I think it might need a spot under my fav's!hehe. . ttyl
That is awsome woman you really captured it. I wrote something like that once, it fell in a fish tank (long story), anyway, mine wasn't as good as all that. It said something like (who will you someday be- will you forget me- will you tell your daughter will you tell your son- of all the old days when you had fun), and so on I can't remember the rest. Great write!
Wow this has some good feeling to it. You made the reader feel what you felt and had a good flow with it. You seem to question yourself a lot but i'm sure you're not a pathetic sob and you'll go far in life with stuff like this Good write i love it!
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Good write i love it!