Description: im a little wired today.. had to let it out.
give me my stuff back -------------------------------------------
Give me back my rolling stones album
Give me back my aerosmith shirt
Give me back all my cds, and movies
You can keep your stupid apology
So you need some time, you need some space? Take it
You need time to think, time to breathe?
While youre breathin
Shut up and listen
Give me back my time
Give me back my smiles
Give me back the motley crue tickets
Give me back my secrets
Give me back all the "i love yous"
Give me back that love song I wrote too
Stop trying to explain
You can keep all your reasons
I just want my stuff back
sounds like your in a situation id want my stuff back too but for most of it your just [censored] out of luck i like it its like"Get the [censored] out of my life but dont forgrt to give me my [censored] back"
thats kind of a funny poem. hehe. i liked all the repetitviness of it and your style of writing. KEEP WRITING. it reminds me of another poem, but i can't remember what it is. anyway, i'm rambling like an idiot here so, i'll just leave you alone and next time i won't be lazy with my typing punctuation and capitalization.
this reminded me of Ten Things I Hate About You. hmmm, i think since this is a rant it doesn't need much critique, unless you want to make this into something more. i liked how you had all your possessions then all the smiles, time, and memories. i'm sorry.