make it so -------------------------------------------
let me know,when caring becomes wrong
then ill stop
only if we could rewind time
stop the clock
to go back and try again
where's my friend
let me know,when loving you becomes wrong
i'll beg the differ
maybe try to show you
paint a picture
of what our life is supposed to be
can't you see
that's not all that is left,and you're not right
please love me
let me know,when i'm wrong about you
won't be true
and if you don't know what i am talking about
here's a clue
you are to me,most perfectly
my bestfriend
and i'll think that most honestly
till the end
and after all this
you still have to go
make it so
I liked this write It is positive in that you are moving forward and letting Love guide you so you may better yourself in life By bettering yourself you are bettering those around you Exceelent Job Take Care Ron AndThank You for the recent commets Always enjoy hearing from you Your Friend Ron
I love this. So deep and hits very very close to home, although I would have been on the recieving end of this. I loved the first line, wonderful job there. It got me interested and also right from the start I could relate.
alrighty than, an entry about friends with lack of negativity and darkness, but subtle longing and care not one i can easily familiarize myself with suffice to say it's a new vision in my sight, one in which seems fare to say that'll for some time it'll be read, but not written by me. people often get upset by that inwhich they loose, but too often they fail to realize this; in order to lose comething you must first have had it to begin with and for that you were, even momentarily(at least in this type of sit.) blessed. take care
i really liked this. the feelings in here where ones i have not run into much but you made them very real here.
'let me know,when caring becomes wrong then ill stop only if we could rewind time stop the clock to go back and try again where's my friend'
the begining was my favorite part. really got me interested, & kept me reading. i really like how simple the form was, yet complicated the feelings were. Really made it very interesting. i liked this alot, you did a good job. Take care and keep smiling ;) ~jenn
Submission Name: make it so
