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    dots Submission Name: Dance's Atomic Structuredots
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    Author: Big J
    ASL Info:    22/m/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 20/29/12
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Comedy
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       This explains my theory that a dance is simply a huge atom

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    dotsDance's Atomic Structuredots
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    Have you ever noticed that dances have the same structure as an atom. As you move to the center of the dance you will witness the dense nucleus which is nearly impossible to pass through.
    Also in nature this nucleus is surrounded by sub atomic partices called electrons,the electrons closest to the center have the most pulling force on other electons, or in other words they are the most attractive,
    it is the same with dances, as you move a way from the center things start to get ugly,
    these outside electrons are also quite eratic and can easily move from one atom to another,
    in much the same way girls on the outer ring of dances are very eratic, and one can usually witnesses random limb movements




    Submitted on 2005-09-25 02:07:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmm..can't say I've ever thought of dancing in that structure before. Tho there is a place near here where it's hard to tell if the people are dancing or getting into a really big fight. lol Interesting write, definitely food for thought.
    Traci :)
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by onetruesmartass | [ Reply to This ]


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