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Author: Drea
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OMG nothing I write makes sense anymore... I dont even got this! I'm not really sure what this is I think it is just a bunch of thtoughts. I should have used a journal I know but my comp is acting funny. So Fuck it.


Love what does it really mean. Is it just four random letters put together to form a word just like so many others. Is it something that idiots make themselves believe they feel to make them feel happier inside. It reminds me of a drug, ya know something you take... and it makes you happy while it lasts but the emotion is never felt. LIke may-b it's real-may-b its not, its one of those mysteries of life.

Submitted on 2005-09-25 07:00:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  You say this like love is always a bad thing. Yes, it causes pain. Yes, it ruins lives. Yes, it's addicting. But it also brings happiness, helps us get through our lives, and enables us to never be alone.
| Posted on 2005-11-06 00:00:00 | by Mia | [ Reply to This ]
  I don't know what to say about this one.It scattered my thoughts through my head about love.This poem really does make you think.I like that in poetry.
| Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by ArtichokeMosher | [ Reply to This ]
  Love is kind of like a drug in that it's addicting. At least that's how I see it. It's hard to define, but it's definitely real. Good work.
| Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by Ruby Rivers | [ Reply to This ]
  This was good
I agree with Ta-Hala love? Love is not something made for we mere humans to understand. We cannot comprehend it, nor define it. But instead, to live by it. The only thing i think you should is that `you need to put it in stanza's. Other than that it was a good hope to hear from oyu and keep up ht egood work.
| Posted on 2005-09-25 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]
  The writing itself is fine and it is what many people wonder.

What is love? Love is not something made for we mere humans to understand. We cannot comprehend it, nor define it. But instead, to live by it. Only fools seek understanding, and love, along with life, are just one of those topics the wisest person could not define.
| Posted on 2005-09-25 00:00:00 | by Ta-hala | [ Reply to This ]

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