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    dots Submission Name: Love, my Lesbiadots
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    Author: my shadow
    Elite Ratio:    4.82 - 291/150/48
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       At the top of my list of favorite poets is the Roman, Catullus. His known works are few. They are mostly about love and more particularly about his love Lesbia. This poem is inspired by Catullus. It is not about a lesbian relationship.


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    dotsLove, my Lesbiadots
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    Love, my Lesbia, is life;
    those who know this,
    speak well of it.
    Those who do not know,
    should go unheeded.

    Life's flickering screens,
    are quickly passing;
    but once with you,
    all is still.

    And if, in our uncounted kisses,
    and many caresses,
    some usher comes,
    again to start the show;
    he will be confused
    by our still life,
    and pass us by.




    Submitted on 2005-09-25 07:30:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very interesting approach. i like the structure and the wording very much. this poem left me wanting, but not in a way that you have left it unfinished; but wanting to read more of your work. keep them coming.
    | Posted on 2005-09-25 00:00:00 | by caster | [ Reply to This ]
      DO WHAT you do and even if someone tries to criticize you don't take offensively.

    plzzzzzzzzzzzz keep up your writing and don't let anyone stop you from fufilling your dreams.

    You left me wanting in a way that a woman could make me feel.

    good write and keep them coming.
    | Posted on 2005-09-28 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]


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