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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Cheesy Joke/Misc
    Total Views: 865
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 274



    Description:
       this should obviously be a joke.....it started out to be forreal then I changed direction a bit and made it stupid and shit


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    I am the voice inside your head
    tellin you just to go ahead
    stab the bitch in the throat
    no one will ever know
    Besides she shoulda known
    not to just brush it off like the breeze
    she shoulda known you don't like cheese (goddamn)




    Submitted on 2005-09-25 13:18:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      LOL! funni! i don't really like cheese either! LOL
    -Alexis
    | Posted on 2006-12-12 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is hilarious.i started off thinkin "ok another depressing write"and then cheese lol hahahahahahahha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more of these need to be made
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]
      ::Laughs:: This was good.
    | Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by Seperia | [ Reply to This ]
      hahahahahaha that is halarious as hell man as [censored] i cant stop laughing hahahahah hahahah hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha well i guess thats enough
    lol
    Fana
    | Posted on 2006-04-08 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      yo this is funny.hahah.mannn cheese?? haha thats funny.



    Da Grim Reaperess
    | Posted on 2006-07-08 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      lol....hahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahaha thats great
    but why wouldnt someone like cheese?

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2006-09-08 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]
      haha. this was so goofy. u aint gotta kill someone cuz of cheeze...c'mon. this was some of the randomest shIt i've ever read.
    | Posted on 2005-09-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      omg..u littke fuCker!lol! this is kinda like mine...called nut...it started serious then i couldnt think of ne thing...so it ended up stoopid!lol! this was cool! lol!it nmade me laugh...hehe!

    XxXsuicidalxxChildXxX
    | Posted on 2005-09-26 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]


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