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    dots Submission Name: truedots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 499
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    dotstruedots
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    love is beautiful, love is blind
    love is leaving it all behind
    for that one person, for better or worse
    it could be a blessing and it could be a curse
    but it doesn't matter, for if they go away
    untill they come back, you'll be counting everyday
    when something is wrong, convince them it'll be okk
    you don't know, but they believe you anyway

    love is real and love is true
    you know you inlove when there's nothing you won't do
    for that one person, it's sad but true
    that one day will
    that peace that you once knew
    is sometimes a stranger in your house
    only stops by to say hello
    good ears and reaction like a mouse
    the shouting and screaming, bellows throughout the house
    like the sound of trains when they collide
    killing thousands of inncoent just watching
    jealousy and fear destroying your pride




    Submitted on 2005-09-25 13:28:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was put together nicely i like it alot good job my nugga or are u white iono yet get bak 2 me on dat anyway dis was a good write my nugga
    | Posted on 2005-12-22 00:00:00 | by heavy knowledge | [ Reply to This ]
      when something is wrong, convince them it'll be okk
    you don't know, but they believe you anyway

    i think this part best showed how love is blind and that real lovers trust each other. u mispelled ok though. i liked this one. it's different from most of ur writes that i've read.
    good write
    "troy"
    | Posted on 2005-09-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      this was very good and the title choice was excellent you gave alot of good examples and put it all togethe nicely
    well done
    great write
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-09-26 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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