Description: I have kind of a problem with it being silent because it makes me paranoid in such a way that i won't sleep if i dont have a sound around... so i wrote this
The Silence -------------------------------------------
In the night I hear nothing
No crickets chirp
And the pain of the silence
I feel within
Desolated by everyone
alone, if you will
I get paranoia
or away from whats real
I wonder and wonder
what is the deal
why do all this urges
send me such a thrill
Such a dash of adrenaline
Why it affects me like this
Ive got it figured out
The silence takes over me
Wow... I could sssooooooo relate to this I hate quiet... thats why I talk so much. This was a great piece. I thought the flow was good and the style everything. Good Job!
This is a nice expression of an inner feeling! Self awareness is always so helpful to keep the peace within yourself and knowing what certain things cause anxiety is a means of prevention. They say silence is deafening and it holds lots of truth to it. It does create a sad and lonely feeling and I find music always seems to help me rid the silence. This is a well written poem! Good job with this one! See ya!
weird but ok i would rather have it loud too because i can't stand it when all is quiet it gets so mysterious and lonely that is why i have my cd player with me wherever i go and of course some loud obnoxius music like system of a down . peace ~becka
Submission Name: The Silence
