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    dots Submission Name: Editdots
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    Author: manicsmuse
    ASL Info:    28
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 146/161/55
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 240
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 604



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dots Editdots
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    Save changes.
    I always miss this critical note.
    Save changes.
    I rewrite each thought in a profound effort to relate myself to so many people.
    Edit.
    Backspace.
    Indent.
    It is then that I declair insanity, to repeat and delete and never
    Save changes.
    The hypocricy of my own entity
    become frail
    And I choose to
    forget
    to
    Save changes.
    Backspace.
    Repeat.
    Delete
    changes
    to save face.
    CAPS LOCK
    ERROR!
    ERROR!



    Delete.




    Submitted on 2005-09-25 15:54:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yep. this is excellent, it's a little unique, and creative, and well executed.

    A nicely different way of getting your feelings across, I liked this a hell of a lot. One typo (declare)

    Well done

    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-09-25 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this. Very creative. I especially like the repetition of the words. I often finding myself wishing that "backspace" worked in real life. I have nothing but compliments for this one. Beautifully done. Great job

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2005-09-25 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool! This reminds me of when I am playing a game too much, or just on the computer for too long, and I make a mistake in reality (like I mees up on a drawing) And I start to look for the Undo button! Then I slap myself for being so stupid.

    This poem is very unique. I've never seen anything like it, and I love it to death.
    | Posted on 2005-09-25 00:00:00 | by Ta-hala | [ Reply to This ]



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