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    dots Submission Name: Satan's Princessdots
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    Author: AngelicDreamer
    ASL Info:    21/f/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.55 - 22/8/6
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 159
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Halloween is my favorite holiday.. so I wrote this to go with it. Please rate and comment. Thank you for reading.


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    dotsSatan's Princessdots
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    Nights of darkness upon us creep,
    While we lay ourselves down to sleep.
    Vampires and witches come out to play,
    To have their fun before the rise of day.
    Down streets and alleys they briskly flow,
    Dark and sinister ways that never show.
    Lurking in corners for victims to catch,
    To steal their soul and their bodies snatch.
    Satan’s princess in darkness reigns,
    Upon men who see her as none complains.
    Her beauty comes alive in the dark of night,
    Underneath the moon that shines so bright.
    Beauty in her face in the darkness glows,
    Upon her victim a trace slowly flows.
    Casting her spell upon his weak heart,
    Destined to live a life without part.
    Blood she must have to quench her thirst,
    The power of her spirit always coming first.
    In daylight she hides under a veil,
    Cast in her darkness of a dreary hell.
    With Satan at her side she sits in peace,
    Waiting for her time that will never cease.
    Satan’s princess roaming in centuries to come,
    As blood keeps her forever younger than some.
    Beautiful vision within any mans eyes,
    Death comes quicker than he can realize.
    Shallow world where darkness is real,
    Satan’s princess has a dream to fill.
    To live forever and be the beauty she is,
    As she conquers eternity with just one kiss.




    Submitted on 2005-09-25 21:18:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thank you to all of you for the comments and constructive criticism. I greatly appreciated you reading. :)
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by AngelicDreamer | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, it's perfect for Halloween, alright.
    You covered most of the dark world in this, and I enjoyed my little foray into satan's kingdom, I just think you could touch the rhythm up a tad, to improve the flow, but that's not a criticism, more of a thought.

    Loved it

    be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-09-28 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      oh i loved this poem. it started off strong and ended great. i mean of all the made creatures in the world vampires are one of my favorites and with this poem you captured their essence i guess you could call it. the flow was prety much consistant and it was just realy good.

    ~Gena~
    | Posted on 2005-09-25 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]



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