Never Let It Go by Roberto Santos

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Author:	Roberto Santos
ASL Info:	18/Male/India
Elite Ratio:	2.96 - 118/159/75
Words:	198

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Love
Total Views:	225
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1204

Description:
I've not posted for quite a while. This has been borne out of my inability to find myself reviewing and criticizing other's work when I couldn't write anything of worth myself. However, that jinx has been broken today with this poem, and it coincidentally comes at a time when my exams are nearly over, with only English language and Commercial studies left.
This poem was borne out of a feeling that has recently filled the empty spaces within me.

Never Let It Go dots

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Will you forgive me if i'm frank and free?
There's so much that I just wanna tell
It's unbelievable, this feeling in me
On your face my thoughts dwell.

I can't believe how fast this has come
We just met a short time back
I think about you even after you've gone
And my heart experiences a certain lack.

Take this feeling and make it grow
Never let it, let it go.
We'll do this right, we'll start out slow
Just never ever let it go.

Now can you tell me if you get this feeling too?
I wanna hear it just from you
Are your feelings free and true?
Just tell me now, what can I do?

I just can't wait for the next time
The next time that I'll say this to you
Lemme just end this silly rhyme
By saying that I only think of you.

Take this feeling and make it grow
Never let it, let it go.
We'll do this right, we'll start out slow
Just never ever, ever let it go.

Submitted on 2005-09-26 04:47:08 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  well done. i especially enjoy the chorus a great deal. we've all been where this song takes us, and it isn't the prettiest place to be. but it sure can inspire us to write at our best, as it has you. this song has inspired me to post a song of a similar subject. good effort, keep writing.
| Posted on 2005-09-26 00:00:00 | by caster | [ Reply to This ]
  i also think that this can be a song.. u have conveyed the feeling very nicely and i think it would be more beautiful when sung
| Posted on 2005-09-26 00:00:00 | by ax2x3m | [ Reply to This ]
  it's got some nice feeling. the phyme is a littel bit forced and some of the words are repeated a little too much, which makes it kind of boring.

overall, it's a fairly well written piece. good job!
| Posted on 2005-09-26 00:00:00 | by LoneWolf | [ Reply to This ]
  i like it a lot! its supposed to be lyrics right?! b/c i can totally see those words being sung! (sorry, i am SUCH a musician!) and a beautiful guitar riff going on in the background! well keep up the good work and nice lyrics comin!
take care
Sierra
| Posted on 2005-09-26 00:00:00 | by PrincessDoom13 | [ Reply to This ]

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