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    dots Submission Name: Poetic Colorsdots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    He only painted in poetic colors:
    he couldn't tolerate red,
    but he adored claret and vermillion.
    He banished blue for azure and cerulean,
    and even burnt sienna is more beautiful
    than brown, if only in name.
    To him a rose might smell as sweet
    with another name,
    but it wouldn't sound as sweet,
    and he was more a poet than a painter.

    Submitted on 2004-04-17 18:51:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this! Nothing else needs to be said by me! But this comment was too short! La La La
    | Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by redthewitch | [ Reply to This ]
      ...and I was thinking, this would be a great first paragraph in a story. You directed my interest to this poet painter and now he is gone.....It is really saying something that you left me wanting more and I came back for another comment...Excellent work with this piece. So few words to describe a person so very interesting to this reader.
    | Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
      I began to feel a little bit of pomposity coming off of this guy who can only love colors with exotic names, but when I read the last line...and, it certainly all came together wonderfully. I always love blue described as "azure or cerulean" ...such wonderful words.

    I enjoyed the little Shakespearian reference to Romeo and Juliet....made me smile.
    | Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
      I love you. Hehe, as a writer and an artist this one is realy beautiful to me, lovely write, m'lady! ~Sicobe R. Crow
    | Posted on 2004-04-18 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that this poem could have more to it.I'm not saying that it was bad but i didn't seem to find much to it.
    | Posted on 2004-04-17 00:00:00 | by silentpoison | [ Reply to This ]
      Ooh I liked this one. Short, simple, but very good. I also enjoyed the allusion to Romeo and Juliet. Nicely done!
    | Posted on 2004-04-17 00:00:00 | by justalyssa | [ Reply to This ]
      i really, really liked this one. honestly, my poems are pretty short, as you've probably noticed, but i believe you need one or two additional stanzas (because the reader feels high and dry when its over)...
    | Posted on 2004-04-22 00:00:00 | by colagirl | [ Reply to This ]

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