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    dots Submission Name: LOVE or LUST?dots
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    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1084
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 988



    Description:
       Am I in love or in lust? What do you get when you read this piece!


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    dotsLOVE or LUST?dots
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    I love the way he kisses
    I love the way he hugs,
    I love the way he cuddles
    and I love the way he rubs.

    I love to stare into his eyes
    and I love when he stares into mine,
    I love it when he holds my hand
    and I love that he is so fine.

    I love massaging his body
    I love kissing him on his nose,
    I love how he is gawked at,
    every single place he goes.

    I love the way his fingers feel
    when they trail across my skin,
    I love he the things we do when we're together,
    feels like such a sin.

    I love the way he makes me feel
    like the most beautiful woman in the world,
    I love how we can just lay together
    without having to say a word.

    I love just being around him
    even though it's not been that long,
    I love that I love everything about him,
    and that so far I've found nothing wrong!




    Submitted on 2005-09-27 10:39:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      its a good pome.and well written.hope u keep up the good work..it reminds mehow i feel about my guy.it feel like u truly know how you feel for the guy that your talking about.
    | Posted on 2005-09-27 00:00:00 | by Lil Irish Raven | [ Reply to This ]
      Only you can answer that question. A very good write. I liked the style and the format you used. It was very effective and very good.
    | Posted on 2005-09-27 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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