i love this... its about real life when you are drunk as hell and just wanna screw - damn i love those nights... anyways this poem is fantastic and going in my favorites... i love it... thanks for writing and pissing people off with the things you write... love it PEACE and LOVE, greg
Ooooh! My my my! This kinda poem could make me blush! haha! I gotta tell you, this made me fu cking laugh! hee hee! And smile too! Geez, and damn and hahaha! I dont know how to give you a serious comment on this cause this is just too damn rich!I had a lot of fun reading this one. Very raw and I commend you for posting this. My hats off to you! haha This was lots of fun to read, and to make me blush, it must be the real deal and holy sh it this is it. haha! *blush* Amazing what a few cocktails will do huh? hahahahahhaaaa! Thanks for the smiles. Take care!
i'm sorry, but that is not poetry! poetry is not about that crap, and neither is eliteskills.com...if you think it's funny, fine. but i will stick to REAL poetry, if you don't mind, ben. maybe you have potential, but this isn't bringing it out! And that is my opinion.
Bad Boy! This sounds like a Hank Williams @ 3 a.m. after way too much wild turkey! Tif's comment adds some interesting visuals. 8^) Let's cum up with more scatalogical kuntry songs & take a picnic to the redneck olympics in Dublin this spring. We'll take a git-tar & my accordian & Sean's tuba for good measure & BLOW THEIR MINDS! Maybe get some free deer jerky for tips! Sound good, you naughty wolf? Cleo
I feel like I just got hit from behind! MUWAHAHAHAHA Don't you love it when your Muse gets toasted and freaky! This sounds like a good bachelor party game - you could have your limerick, a woman bent over poster with her hoha and a paper wing ding to pin on ~ Doggy Style Pin the Tail on the Donkey (or beaver...kinda. This made me laugh and being on Darvocet/Vicodin hasn't hurt either! he he he Love,Peace,Joy! tif ;)