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    dots Submission Name: Incarnadine Falldots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
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       ? ! = Darvocet

    Love,Peace,Joy & painpills

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    dotsIncarnadine Falldots
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    Everywhere color scatters
    the wind
    landscape
    filemot
    and
    incarnadine

    F
    A
    L
    L

    Leaving
    the imprint
    of summer's
    moments
    burnt and faded
    the pleasure
    of the
    wind ~ ~ ~




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      I think this poem truly captures the essence of autumn quite nicely. Although you use few words you paint a soft beauty in the minds eye, which is rarely done properly. Excellent job!

    Meow!
    | Posted on 2005-10-17 00:00:00 | by lynxstarfire | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked it and i think its really good. especially the way you have written the word fall, it really adds value to the entire poem.
    | Posted on 2005-09-29 00:00:00 | by jassal | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiff, what a wonderful addition to the plethera of autumn poems (I must write a spring one)

    This was very peaceful, and I too have been introduced to a new word.

    Great stuff, dear one-armed one!

    be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-09-28 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Thankyou for the new word! "Incarnadine" I like it. I know what Ben Collier would call that color. this is beautiful, light & airy. I love how you've made the wind the focus, spreading the colors chaotically. I like how you never said the word "leaves", but that's exactly & explicitly what one sees in this image.
    Somewhere I read winter is the season of structure; spring the season of texture; summer the season of motion; fall the season of color. So here's your lovely ode to that transition from motion to color. Simple & beautiful!
    cleo
    | Posted on 2005-09-28 00:00:00 | by CleoCollier | [ Reply to This ]
      Leaving behind moments of summer is a lovely thought of happy times and all the joys that summertime held. Summertime for me is always linked to love and romance. You set the scene very well for the arrival of autumn (or fall as you would call it across the pond).
    | Posted on 2005-09-27 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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