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    dots Submission Name: Mixed Emotionsdots
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    Author: Drea
    ASL Info:    18/f/nowhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 289/142/53
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 771
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 499



    Description:
       This is how I feel right now... I think they might have to send me to the mental institution.


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    dotsMixed Emotionsdots
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    I'm hapy
    But I'm sad
    I'm glad
    but I'm mad

    I'm sick but
    I'm well
    I'm in heaven
    as I burn in hell

    I'm hurt
    but I'm fine
    I'm a mess
    but beaty devine

    I'm social
    but solitary
    I'm bright
    but melancholy

    I'm crying
    but laughing
    I'm living
    but dying





    Submitted on 2005-09-28 06:31:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      huh, did you dig into my head for that? no, just playing. i'm actually being institutionalized soon, but i suppose that's irrelevant, and probabily doesn't make you feel any better. yeah, any how, nice write. gets straight to the point, with out overexemplefying the maticualtion, and without making it bitterly simplistic. in other words short, but sweet, without it being too easy, or complex.
    | Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      So many things I want to ask?

    1. Why do you have these mixed emotions when you write?

    2. How do you think this makes your viewers feel when they read this?

    Finally I see what you are going through and I will be there if you ever need someone to talk to so all you have to do is pm me ok

    yours truly
    poet09
    | Posted on 2005-09-28 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]


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