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Mixed Emotions


Author: Drea
ASL Info:    18/f/nowhere
Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 289 /142 /53
Words: 64
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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This is how I feel right now... I think they might have to send me to the mental institution.


Mixed Emotions



I'm hapy
But I'm sad
I'm glad
but I'm mad

I'm sick but
I'm well
I'm in heaven
as I burn in hell

I'm hurt
but I'm fine
I'm a mess
but beaty devine

I'm social
but solitary
I'm bright
but melancholy

I'm crying
but laughing
I'm living
but dying





Submitted on 2005-09-28 06:31:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  huh, did you dig into my head for that? no, just playing. i'm actually being institutionalized soon, but i suppose that's irrelevant, and probabily doesn't make you feel any better. yeah, any how, nice write. gets straight to the point, with out overexemplefying the maticualtion, and without making it bitterly simplistic. in other words short, but sweet, without it being too easy, or complex.
| Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
  So many things I want to ask?

1. Why do you have these mixed emotions when you write?

2. How do you think this makes your viewers feel when they read this?

Finally I see what you are going through and I will be there if you ever need someone to talk to so all you have to do is pm me ok

yours truly
poet09
| Posted on 2005-09-28 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]


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