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    dots Submission Name: What is Love?dots
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    Author: poet09
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    dotsWhat is Love?dots
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    love what is love?

    Is it something that people spend their whole lives waiting for,
    Is it someone who shut the door to their heart

    The process of giving up one's whole self for their partner
    Art of creation that is what love is supposed to be
    Enjoying something that takes a lifetime to understand


    The love of your life that has just walked out on you

    Love what is love?

    Only that person alone can determine what love really means to them.




    Submitted on 2005-09-28 06:36:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this....most people say that love is one thing to everyone...but they never really say how different it really is...some peopl, their knees go weak, some people, they feel like cant breath, and somepeople just go crazy....for me..... love means everything..i am frantically searching for someone to love me for me....this kinda gives me hope that someone will be out their for me feeling the same way that i am.
    good write
    ~lonely goth~
    | Posted on 2007-12-13 00:00:00 | by lonely goth | [ Reply to This ]
      I like "The process of giving up one's whole self for their partner" when you determine to love someone, then you must prepare everything especially sacrifice. But sometimes we receive you'r m8 self in exchange of giving your own self nice work keep it up m8
    | Posted on 2005-10-01 00:00:00 | by garnet4david | [ Reply to This ]
      i like your idea love can be all you have mentioned and then somei can say i have loved my share of people family friends and relationships each holds a value to your soul i dont believe a pesons heart has anything to do with love i think it all comes fom within your self
    people can even love the people they hate if that makes any sence
    love is and can be many things if you are a child and your parents dont teach you what love is then you will never no how to love another
    anywaz great write no bad intent given
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-09-28 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I know the feeling I'm wondering the same thing myself. Love is kinda wierd. but you'll figure it out. I have finally realized that it's the man or woman that's whats more confusing. the opposite sex are always more confusing if you don't understand yourself.
    | Posted on 2005-09-28 00:00:00 | by lost and alone | [ Reply to This ]


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