This is a good write where you definately express the hurt that was dealt to you very well I hope you can realise you learned mant lessons from this relationship which you can use to make the next relationship perfect God Bless Your Friend Ron
I'm going to take a guess here, but did this someone cheat on you or something? You left them because of that and they want to be back with you. Only guessing! You don't have to tell me if you don't want me to. Well anyways about the poem. It was good, but the flow could have gone a little better, but what am I saying I'm only a 14 year old revolutionary writer. I'm a rebel. It was good, but not to full of emotions. BUt it got your feelings across pretty well.