he sat down and played guitar told me to look for a friend in the moon and as I looked into the stars and listened to his tune
I think this is great. Didn't you read it to me last weekend? I like the line about looking for a friend in the moon. Very cool. I love how you can tell a story with your peotry when all I can do is complain. Good job, sis!
Yes I agree with the others. A very good write. Reminds me of my husband a few years ago. He had long silver hair back in a pony tail. He look so 60's. I liked it. Any ways Keep up the great writing. God bless.
this was great i like the setting of the thought and the whole story behind it i wrote a poem Silver hair i am not sure wether you got a chance to read or not it also reminds me a little of myself wihout the ponytail but the silver hair and being able to write and sing once again great write sandman